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Denathaniel Nightrain

Posted: Tue, 2010.03.02 22:26
by Denathaniel Nightrain
Basic Information
  • Name:
    Denathaniel Nightrain
  • Gender:
    Male
  • Age:
    19
  • Species:
    100% Human
Appearance
  • Skin Colour:
    pale white skin with easy red tones around the face when agitated
  • Hair Colour:
    Dark brown
  • Eye Colour:
    Blue-ish violet
  • Height:
    5' 10"
  • Weight:
    135 lbs
  • Tattoos:
    full back purple with hint of red dragon, wings situated at the shoulders blades closed position, tail wrapped down around left leg, back left paw ‘dug’ in hip, back right paw hanging down right leg, front left paw ‘dug’ behind left shoulder, front right paw on top of right shoulder, head passing over shoulder, coming to middle upper chest looking towards front with jaw half-opened with yellow slit-eyes, starting from back of skull and all along the spine are spikes ending smoothly at the tip of tail
  • Scars:
    none
Wizard Traits
  • Describe your wand.
    • Length:
      14"
    • Core:
      Ashwinder ash
    • Wood:
      lignum vitae
  • Familiar:
    fox with black tipped tail, ears and bottom paws named Izmael
  • Patronus:
    unable
  • Bloodline:
    mixed
  • Animagus?: N
  • Parseltongue?: N
  • Other?: N
Personality
  • Type: ISTJ
  • Likes:
    Having something to do, reading action/fiction, lazing about watching medical/police soaps on the tube, having his brother be quiet and his muggle medical set of surgical scalpels.
  • Dislikes:
    Being forced to socialise, having to read obligatory study material, cleaning the bathroom
  • Fears:
    Being found out by muggles, going grocery shopping, not hearing from brother for more than a month
  • Greatest Desire:
    Being able to perform medical treatment without restriction
  • Worst Fear:
    Getting attacked and eaten by bunnies
  • How would your friends describe you?
    Not that social of a guy, but if asked by co-workers said to be a distant but present force ((If you ask Christobal, he’ll just tell you that his brother is a headless running chicken mother-hen that tends to be a tad too violent when fixated on something....or someone))
  • What do you like best about yourself?
    Fearlessness in front of a situation and challenge
  • What do you like least about yourself?
    Being so affected by brother’s constant troublemaking and trouble finding
Background
  • Hometown:
    Salem
  • Academy:
    Salem’s Witch Institute
  • Profession:
    Beginning of standard healer training
  • Pets:
    Two ravens
  • Family:
    Father named Gustav Nightrain whom has one parent Pureblood and the other Muggle and mother named Juniper Castel whom is a Muggleborn, older brother of three years named Christobal
  • Significant Other: Nope
  • History:
    Has lived in Salem all his life, having been forced by parents to attended muggle school until he was accepted in Salem Witches’ Institute. Once there he has done his best to break the school mould to learn as much as he could for Healing, which made it difficult and now is doing catching up for his studies.

    Though youngest of two, he is the more mature and does his best to care for older brother, who is far from being a tranquil child, even less when an adult. No matter what the situation, always off to run after Christobal if only to hex him himself to settle him for a few days, only to repeat all over again.

    Moved to England so he could be away from childhood fears of discovery and wanting to be away from oppressing parents, taking his brother along for the ride in hopes of straightening his character, which is incorrigible. Has an internship at St-Mungo’s and also forces himself to do side studies of Muggle medical care just in case he ever needs to correct those incompetents. ((Or just have something else up his sleeve in the ways of torture))

Other Notes: No
  • Are you playing any other characters here?
No

Re: Denathaniel Nightrain

Posted: Tue, 2010.03.02 22:48
by Gellert Grindelwald
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The admins have seen this application and are considering it. Any questions, comments, or requests we have are included below this stamp. Please watch this thread for a final judgement.
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- Caucasian is not a skin colour, it is a race. We're looking for an actual colour descriptor, here, whether that's a description (off-white with a hint of yellow), a crayon colour (peach), or a hex value (EAD5C9). Hell, if you want to use hex, here's a handy skin colour chart for it.

- Bunnies? Seriously? I mean, that's cool, if you actually mean to play it that way.

- So, looking at your lineage, there, you're mostly Mudblood. For reference, is Christobal also a Wizard, or did his talents fall prey to the biological probabilities?

- If you're serious about having pursued medical magic as a speciality at Salem, I expect that there was a whole lot of 'something wrong with that boy' going around, as it's a Witches' speciality, not a Wizards'. I expect that there were a good many birchings involved, as well as some sporting beatings from other schoolboys. (I also just updated the Salem post about six hours ago, so you might want to take another look, since I know you were working on this app before that.)

That ends my list of concerns, for the moment. Arcturus should be along, soon, to pass his judgements.

Re: Denathaniel Nightrain

Posted: Wed, 2010.03.03 00:04
by Arcturus Black
- I agree with Gellert about the bunnies, and would like to know why the character is afraid of them.

-I'm also a bit surprised by the tv watching habits. Since this game is set in 1974, one has to take into account that both medical and police shows at that time were a great deal less realistic than the modern versions.

Re: Denathaniel Nightrain

Posted: Wed, 2010.03.03 00:38
by Gellert Grindelwald
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Congratulations! Your character has been approved, and the IC forums are now open to you!

Please examine the Rules one more time before making your first post.
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Riffing on Arcturus's comment about television in the '70s, here's a list of medical dramas and police dramas, with the years they ran. Might be useful if you ever need to talk about what you were watching.

Re: Denathaniel Nightrain

Posted: Wed, 2010.03.03 00:42
by Denathaniel Nightrain
Thank you very much for your help Mr. Grindelwald. I am very honored to have been accepted.